This is a record of my learning during my time at Pt. England School.
Hi Heuolo-ata,I really enjoyed reading your experience of camp. I could clearly tell that you really enjoyed going to Kawau Island. I went there last year when I was a year 6 and I loved it as well. My favourite part of your story was when you said "Have you ever wanted to conquer your fear?" I thought that was such a good way of starting your paragraph. Anyways, Keep up the good work.Yours Sincerely, Mubasshira
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Hi Heuolo-ata,
I really enjoyed reading your experience of camp. I could clearly tell that you really enjoyed going to Kawau Island. I went there last year when I was a year 6 and I loved it as well.
My favourite part of your story was when you said "Have you ever wanted to conquer your fear?" I thought that was such a good way of starting your paragraph. Anyways, Keep up the good work.
Yours Sincerely,
Mubasshira
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